I would seriously recommend giving this blog post a read, especially if your writing includes action sequences.  The whole site is worth visiting, but this article struck a chord with me, probably because I’m in a more action oriented sequence of my novel. Give it a read and learn from it what you can.

For the past two weeks, I’ve been writing about descriptive passages and Vernor’s Law, trying to make clear that a description is most powerful and most

via Descriptive Passages, Part III: Action.